Friends
the means to survive
Enemies
their only desire
is to
demolish you
constant fear
drags you down
sleep
is not an option
you never know
where
your friends
heart belongs
or where
your enemies
are until
you find them
or
the ones in charge
are bored
your life depends
on the excitment
or those in charge
will end it
that was cool, did you right that?
ReplyDeleteThat book looks really good, I've been meaning to read it but I am reading about 5 other books right now, haha. Awesome poem, makes me want to read the book even more!
ReplyDeletewow i love the layout and the idea of this poem! good job and the book sounds ecxiting!
ReplyDeleteThat does sound like the book would be good. The poem is great anyways. What kind of layout is that?
ReplyDeleteThats not much like the book but it was still a good poem.
ReplyDeleteJust wondering Derek, how is it not like the book? I guess, the point is you don't know who you can trust, and the only way to make it out is to kill your friends(or allies).
ReplyDeleteI like ho wyou are sticking to your guns, holding up your side of the topic. I haven't read the book, so I can't say one way or the other, but I like the way you tried something new.
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