Thursday, April 21, 2011

Saison d'Autumn

Author's note: I tried to write this poem in french just to see how hard it was. Below it is a translation.

Link to voicethread

Avec les feuillages des coleur brilliant
et arbes des verte terre
Je regarde le mou et belle saison
devenis le froid hiver

Translation:
With the leaves of bright color
and trees of green earth
I watch the soft and beautiful season
become the cold winter

5 comments:

  1. This is really cool to read. I hope you shared this with your French teacher. Also, this would be an awesome use of VoiceThread because I don't know French, and would love to hear you speak the poem.

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  3. I agree that it would be nice to be able to hear what this piece sounds like in French because what I read in English was really pretty and sometimes things in a different language sound cool and even prettier. By the way, I love your doggy!

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  4. Kelsey that is a really cool poem. I liked how you thought outside the box and wrote a poem in French! I think it turned out really nice and you should write more in French in the future.

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  5. This was a really cool idea. I think it's also good that you understand French well enough to adapt it to something like poetry. Like the others said I would really like to hear what it sounds like in French. The only thing is that in the translation to English, I think that "le" is supposed to be "the," but otherwise this was great!

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